After the presentation

Previously what I've done for the final presentation last week were 5 folios containing my illustrated sunflowers and a small booklet of photos for a photographic record of the dying process day by day. Right now following up to what I had for feedback last week was that the files and the booklet too disconnected, that they don't look like they belong together, the folios may be a little unnecessarily big (A4) Other than that, the concept was good. So following up to that, the deadline for submission being pushed back to Wednesday, I'm trying to see what I can improve or revise on what I have done so far.

Right now I'm thinking of fusing everything into just one book, to make things easier to see but at the same time I'm hoping the form of the book is more than just a book. Wondering if it's too ambitious. Here's what I have in mind now:


I'm thinking of folding each divider page (before another section starts) to something like this, hoping it looks like an extended petal out of the book. Thus fulfilling the idea of the bright yellow petals branching out like the sunflower. Well of couse the photo right now shows a mock up of used papers.

Then the inside should show things roughly like this. I'm still not sure how I should fold them, which is the challenging part. Whether it'll work out I'm not sure too but nevertheless I think I'll give it a try. I'll have to think carefully how I organise the content inside due to these pages. Well I have 1 day left to work on it....